Thursday, April 19, 2012

Blog: 8


According to the passage "Is Music a Good Tool for Health?" actually only indicates that music has really played a major role to numerous of people also it has a profound effect on your body and mind. Throughout this passage, theories have been well stated and been proving true. It basically talks about an "music therapy" which people regain help through music it also how it helps to heal the sickness whether it's regarding to cancer patients down to children just with attention problems. Those theories been well provided and so helpful that hospitals are starting to use it for patients regarding to depression, pain management, etc. which can be very well necessary.

The article stated "This is not surprising, as music affects the body and mind in many powerful ways." Depending on whether or not your body gives a full affect with the changes of different kinds of music, you could state whether or not this statement "This is not surprising, as music affects the body and mind in many powerful ways", can actually be true.  For example, you have a several things in mind such as thoughts and ideas but you don’t feel comfortable speaking or nor do want to speak on it. But so happen you decided to play some soft, touching slow jams and that one song so happen explain everything you may be going through, not only did it hit the spot but it also has you in deep thoughts and your body will start to react on it. You become more at ease because your mind met your body through the soft touching tunes.

 Another example, you so upset for whatever the reason or situation maybe and you just really want to react but don’t want to pay for the consequences later on that day. No one can stop you nor do you even want to hear what anyone has to say, but you do decide to listen to music. Being in that area alone while listening to some good music that pump your veins  can ease you mind and take you off of what you was mad at. It relief some stress and whatever you was extremely mad at make everything else don’t even matter anyone. But how about, you home alone and your system is on max listening to "crank music" and that bass is hitting off your head and entering your soul. So now you actually feel you so you decide to “bug out” with the beat just because you couldn't hold on in. Once again that’s the music taking control over your body.
Being without music is more like being without a phone in teenage timing “it’s not possible”.  Music helps basically through anything and everything and that’s a powerful tool

1 comment:

  1. Charmaine, this needs further work to be passing. The introductory paragraph really extends into the second one, since you do not make a new point of your own there but elaborate on one the writer made. There are also some grammar problems with issues like missing verbs ("you home alone"). The third paragraph, while it still needs work as well, is the better of the ones you have.

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